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SCFrankles ([personal profile] scfrankles) wrote in [personal profile] stonepicnicking_okapi 2021-04-08 11:46 pm (UTC)

I think the form does work well though. As you go from either end into the centre, the shortening lines suggests the tension building up - especially I’m fanning my breast /all eyes on me /and /my fan /on me /eyes

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