Just been looking up the plot of the story - sounds horribly fascinating.
And your poem does capture that sinister atmosphere ^^" I particularly like the lines ‘journey’s end in lovers’ meeting’/ when two and two make four and the house goes dancing, turns about,/ when two and four make six. The increasing numbers seem to increase the tension, and the anticipation of a horrifying ending.
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Date: 2019-05-13 05:15 pm (UTC)And your poem does capture that sinister atmosphere ^^" I particularly like the lines ‘journey’s end in lovers’ meeting’/ when two and two make four and the house goes dancing, turns about,/ when two and four make six. The increasing numbers seem to increase the tension, and the anticipation of a horrifying ending.