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Title: blessings on an early spring walk
Rating: Gen
Poetic form: English sonnet
a wisp of smoke piques curiosity
a gift of autumn on the cusp of spring
the spirit wakes, the mind shuns paucity
and wonders what more boons this walk will bring
a pale half-moon in the afternoon sky
incongruous, chalked smudge on even blue
a prayer of thanks for all wonders passed by
and under and around and, blindly, through
then coming down on the one, a hitched stride
along the cracked back of a concrete snake
a funk motif which catches too much to glide
the blessing of hymn to incense and ache
a trio which elevate tedious
and make now more than next and previous
Rating: Gen
Poetic form: English sonnet
a wisp of smoke piques curiosity
a gift of autumn on the cusp of spring
the spirit wakes, the mind shuns paucity
and wonders what more boons this walk will bring
a pale half-moon in the afternoon sky
incongruous, chalked smudge on even blue
a prayer of thanks for all wonders passed by
and under and around and, blindly, through
then coming down on the one, a hitched stride
along the cracked back of a concrete snake
a funk motif which catches too much to glide
the blessing of hymn to incense and ache
a trio which elevate tedious
and make now more than next and previous