My poem: B is for bells

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Title: B is for bells
Rating: Gen
Length: 20
Poetic form: acrostic cinquain

bright bells
expel the—ding!
long held and un-knelled—dong!
love—ding! joy—dong! a song of sweet
sweet swells

Comments

[smallhobbit]

This is lovely - perfect use of both forms!

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Thank you!

[debriswoman]

That is so cheerful:-)

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Thank you!

[dr_zook]

I had to look up both acrostic and cinquain (thanks to you I'm finally learning these things, haha), and you did wonderful! I really like how haptically it reads. :D

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Aw, life long learning! Ha!

Yes, having them read normally is the challenge. Otherwise they sound like a primary school assignment.