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Title: Sign of Life
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes (ACD)
Poetic form: Burns stanza (x 6)
Length: 300
No. of lines: 36
Rating: Teen
For: [personal profile] mafief
Also for: 2019 Merry Month of Masturbation - Day 10
Summary: After Afghanistan, but before Holmes, Watson wanders about London at night.
Prompt:



In the cesspool with idlers and loungers he drains.
An eleven and sixpence in hand for his pains.
And there’s no one to hear if he cries or complains
in a room on the Strand.
In the night, to escape all his burdens and banes,
he sets forth on the land.

Through the city he wanders without purpose or aim,
by the shops, ‘cross the parks, along streets he can’t name.
Every night is a novel, each day much the same,
And he watches them all.
There, the reveler, the deviler, and crown prince of shame
amidst peddler and stall.

As he surveys the river, he grieves he can’t paint.
Then he’s lost ‘round the docks with its brine and its taint.
There he spies a young sailor, feels something quite faint
in his moribund frame.
But the seaman’s a ghost: there he is, there he ain’t.
as the fog lays its claim.

The next night it is Limehouse. He breathes its perfumes
of the spices in rices and vices in tombs,
navigating by lanterns which hang like the plumes
in an opium den.
There’s a lad, he’s quite something, the pose he assumes
makes a corpse think of sin.

He returns to his rooms more alive than fatigued
and throws off the mantle of dreamer bereaved.
No mistake, there’s an ache, an old friend, he’s intrigued,
so he spits on his palm.
And he thinks of the lad and the sailor un-leagued
and applies the wet balm.

As he strokes, he remembers what once made him tick,
resurrected by lust, a young dog, an old trick.
He imagines it all, from the tight to the slick,
free from blot, free from strife.
And he thinks as he watches the lurch of his prick,
‘Not a bad sign of life.’

Date: 2019-05-12 12:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ilthit
That was beautiful! I mean, sordid, but awesome!

Date: 2019-05-13 04:44 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ilthit
I used to write a lot more sordid stuff than I do now, I don't know why. Maybe it comes in waves. I blush to read it again sometimes but at the same time I know if it's good sordid, then there's nothing to be ashamed of.

Date: 2019-05-14 03:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ilthit
Fandom does give us a lot of freedom that way. Sometimes I just second guess myself to death. Creativity has difficulty flowing in the presence of shame and Fandom is beautifully unashamed. <3 And it lets you disconnect from it.

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