Yahtzee Roll #2: Fill #5: Original Poetry: Gen

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Title: Zesty
Fandom: Original
No. of Lines: 8
Rating: Gen
Poetic form: Ottava rima

…arresting scent of lemon zest
and curd from sunny flower-shaped treats…
...dusted with sugary stars lest
confections prove too tart to eats…
…set there, on the plate, giving pause,
and, thus, without probable cause…
…hundreds and thousands [quiet cough]
…hundreds and thousands…scraped right off…

Comments

[smallhobbit]

Miss Marple is suspicious!

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Yes, if I ever make it to England, I have many things I want to do: 1. Baker Street Museum 2. Zoo (to see Inky) 3. Show up completely uninvited and make ourselves at home in the village of debriswoman 4. Tea! all the teas, high, cream, whatever and---5. Hundreds and thousands (without the arsenic)